Alliteration

** ​ ​Be sure to underline the uses of alliteration in your poem.**
The battle of the stars is heartwarming. During the day when no one can see the __stars stir__ around, waking up. They need peace in there lives instead of pain, breath-taking pain. Each night everyone of them __stay so still__, so people can star gaze, but during the day where no one can see them, they are moaning and groaning, aching and breaking. Someone needs to help before they leave the sky-for good. -Juggalette_4_lyfe

 **Stairway to Misery**

I looked out the window, clouds were beginning to collide high above. The sky turns into a mysterious mystic gray color. All the squirrels and birds vanished as the weather gets dangerous. Rain begins to __drizzle__, __drip__, and __drowns__ the mud making it mushy and gooey. Water begins to rise as a thunderstorm struck a tree into pieces. The window; all fogged up and I can't barely see anything. Spots of rain clinged to the window. No sunshine seems to __appear__ outside __and approach__ the clouds to make it fade away. I pray for sunshine and the sky to clear up. - AgentFluffyBunny1211

**ICY WATER** Looking out of the boat, I see a polar bear and her baby the polar bear goes to look for food leaving her baby behind the ice cracks, and the baby drifts away. The baby soon gets hungry immitating her mom, she jumps into the ocean __the experience is exciting and exhilerating.__ She opens her eyes all around her are colors, and although the experience is amazing she knows to be alert. Her father was killed by a sea lion but her mom doesn't like to talk about it. She soon finds a school of fish and attacks, they disperse, __swimming speedingly and steadily away,__ but one little fish wasn't fast enough and the polar bear catches it. Maybe surviving won't be so hard after all. -STRABERRY2- As I walked towards the door, students walk by, talking and laughing like old times but its not old times, its something better; __exciting like eggs with ham. Eager yet earnestly__ I walked to my first period, athletics. Like every first day they just talked, I made it through my first class. All day was like that but what I was afraid of was the ride home. On the bus. I have heard stories about the bus. Some good some bad; mostly bad. So I've heard our bus has been in two accidents, all with the same driver, Mr. Bob. As the bus pulled into the circle, the doors __slowly opened, to show an old man with a shiny head.__ I got on. On the way home he zipped __through traffic, stop signs and traffic lights.__ I thought I would never make it home. but eventually I did, but I think my __heart hit its max, my blood pressure was high__, and I was TERRIFIED! I got off the bus __thanking God that I was traveling__ on my feet not on the bus wheels. I survived my bus ride. -STRABERRY2-
 * The Bus**

We're running fast, trying to get out of this place. I have to get away from here. __We must get away from a fierce fighting foe.__ Feet pounding, head throbbing, I run through bushes and leaves. This is the most intense moment of my life. My partner is now running slower. He must catch up, but he stops to catch his breath. __Waiting wouldn't work__; I have to keep going. Not even knowing where I'm going, I push myself to keep running. I now decide to look behind me. My partner is nowhere in sight. He is now probably killed. The thought haunts me while I run. Leaving my partner was one of the most harsh decisions I have made yet. I am now left to survive on my own. Out here, no one will hear my plead for help. __Out here, help is never heard.__ - pc24  __Thomas tugged__ and pulled in this game of tug-of-war, the ribbon __tied to the__ middle of the rope went back and forth, hovering over a puddle of mud, he's __trying to__ survive in this game of tug of war. -Drama_Qween

**I walked __through The thick__ door Into the classroom. Feeling nervous in My __seat, sweating__ __So i can stay__ cool, Thinking to myself, //Am I going to survive? Will I be able to Pass this class And move on? Don't panic!! Everything Will be okay.// Getting __comfortable, Confidence came__ through My mind and body, Knowing, I will survive.** **- funnybunny_12 **   I woke up not knowing were I am surrounded by trees all around me. __I sat sill staring at the snake sleeping on the tree branch__. I ran looking for safety in the woods,but there is hardly any water. __You can feel the sun sizziling on your skin and so hot you lose yourself.__ I fell down scraping my knees and elbows wondering if i'll ever get out to free land alive.

As I __rapidly ran__ thourgh the __feverish forest__, making sure Iwas not being fallowed , only the __shady shadows__ fallowed, an image appeared ahead, ​ its __dazed dak eyes__ stared back apon me, I was done for. ( -strawberrys-)

​ __Survival__ is like eatting a __sandwich__ on a __sandy__ desert. __Turning__ fish __into__ __tofu to__ eat. Runnig from __wild wolves waiting__ to eat you. __Trying to__ make a __tent__. __Fishing for food__ and wrestling it down. Survival is a life or death choice.  TheMajestic Eagle

The __rabbits running__ over the roses, __Hippos huddling__ in for a meeting __Salamanders swimming__ in the water, __Jaguars jumping__ and running around, All to __find food__. All around the forest, Animals hopping and running, Birds flying and landing on trees, All to __find food__. -Roxy_M-